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» Poem: JUST LET ME FALL
JUST LET ME FALL
written by bloody_tears_girl
08:32 PM 4/12/05
here i go again,
i'm standing on the edge.
i won't even bother to pray,
cuz it won't work anyway.
so i think i'll just fall.

so as try to grab hold of something strong,
i realize you're not there, where did i go wrong?
so i'll just let it slip away,
so it will end today.

my wings won't flap,
and i can't fall back,
so just let me scream,
no, this is not a dream.
just let me fall into this pit.

so there i go, falling deep down,
just waiting until i hit the ground,
there's just one more thing to say before i die,
i love you, and goodbye.


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by Overtaken{by}Depression (4-12-2005 - 08:56 PM)
This poem hit me hard. lol. Ouch. Anyway it's perfect! Good job! U2U me. ~Courtney

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