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Full Circle... pain
written by ForsakenDream01:46 PM 4/14/05Your open mouth will be your grave,
The words you speak take away.
Hatred, bleeding, all inside,
Wishing, wanting, just to die.
So cold, the skin under your nails,
the torn flesh that you started to peel.
You wisper into the night,
What you say is right,
Is wrong in the light.
I run, fall, and lay faceless,
Walk, crawl, and die nameless.
all inside this empty grave,
the words that always take away.
I see you as you bleed,
I watch you as you bleed.
The empty hole in your eyes,
Hiding behind all the lies.
Drowning inside this wishing well,
In the dark for so long, in this water hell.
Seven days I lasted below,
The open grave of a water hole.
All I want is to get back at everyone,
Kill them all for leaving me all alone.
Mother didnt want me any more,
Bagged my head and called me a whore.
I still live in this water grave,
Your voice takes my soul away... |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I wrote it about the Ring, how Samara feels...
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| » Comments / Feedback | by FireyDemon13 (4-14-2005 - 03:36 PM)
| Pretty good. Once I got to the end and it reminded me of The Ring, then I read your footnote and it was. Go me! |
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