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» Poem: What Happened? *plz comment*
What Happened? *plz comment*
written by bloody_tears_girl
07:10 AM 4/18/05
laying there,
the warm sensation overcomes me
in your arms,
i thought u would feel the same
i fade out of reality,
suddenly i snap back
i call out your name
but i dont hear your voice
i remember when you promised youd always be there
so whyd u leave me?
i just want u back
to stop the knife from cutting me
to stop the tears from burning me
to stop the pain from hurting me
what happened to what we had?
1 little problem and u abandon me
ive heard around from people
saying your love for me is gone
but did u even love me in the beginning?
maybe i dont know everything about what happened
but if u still love me
and if u still want me
please,
just let me know
and let me know that your ok.


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» Comments / Feedback
by DarkRage (4-18-2005 - 10:55 AM)
k...i lik'd.

by Miserable_Death_By_Love (4-18-2005 - 05:54 PM)
I feel the same pain your feeling

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