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Last day without you (now and forever)
written by Misery08:59 PM 9/8/04if i knew this was the last day that i'd have you with mei could have thrown everything aside and show you i cared, just so you would see
i would have told you every little secret i kept
i would have admitted to every tear i wept
i would have told you all the words i never said but you wished to hear
i would have slain your every fear
but you left me you said goodbye
you took your life and because of that my heart breaks withers and dies
you left me, you killed the small living part of me
now a happy end will not be seen |
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do not judge if you dont understand
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Xx brOken xX (9-8-2004 - 09:04 PM)
| i understand. good poem. i feel that way too... |
by moondemonsurferpunk (9-12-2004 - 04:54 AM)
| that was so beautiful. I understand. |
by Misery (9-14-2004 - 08:52 PM)
| thank you both for the feedback. thanks for understanding. |
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