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Your So-called God
written by Poison Ivy10:54 PM 9/12/04The night falls in a heavy,
Suffocating cloak,
Exalted are we.
The God for which you pray
Pretends to care,
And turns away.
Swallowed into the fenced in dark.
All hope must die.
Your fire will burn
But not for long.
How could you abandon me, God?
When I was the one,
Who was wronged?!
Angels surround me, crying, asking,
รข??How could you denounce Him?! |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by brit420brat69 (9-13-2004 - 03:45 AM)
| i like that...seriously, I like the thought of it, and the format. but mainly the thought behind it...quistion?! have you ever found yourself screaming and cursing god out lookin at the sky with tears in yur eyes? idk...i have... |
by Lovely_Suicide (9-13-2004 - 04:53 AM)
| dont go pulling God down yor the one who turned you back not God |
by restitchedRAGDOLL (3-16-2005 - 06:41 PM)
| well you can kiss my ass! you havent lived my life! |
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