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» Poem: Love you
Love you
written by lost_cause
12:53 AM 9/13/04
fuck this messed up life we live
how we cant take and yet we give
this shit that passes everyday
life doesnt seem worth living anyways
who gives a damn about what we feel
no one cares that this is real
cutting deep to make shit bearable
this fucking habit is so terrible
the faces liik at us and dont notice
its all just some act or shit
how we act and how we feel
this ficking pain is so unreal
the days go by and i die down
my smile constantly a frown
the color in my life begins to fade
no one notices day after day
i quiet down and you can tell
that some things may not be well
i wait for you to hold me tight
hold me with love throughout the night
i love you and always will
the pain dies down with one last pill
though you dont know its happening
the time or place ill be leaving
shit goes wrong a lot in life
people love you its alright
heres a hug and i love you
so you can know what ive been through
suicide sounds great sometimes
but be smart and live your life
im glad they saved my life last time
so i could share with you this rhyme
dont leave me i couldnt bear it
i tried once to leave this shit
my life was awful and is again
but keep me alive so we can win
fuck the people who dont care
i do and i need you there
they dont get it they are wrong
this isnt for thier attention
if i left you then would you cry
if you left me then i might die
hold on for a while it should get better
think of this when the towel gets redder
cutting burning shit like that
it hurt so bad where i was at
suicide will help you none
stand up and face your problems
fuck those out there who hate us all
someones there to break the fall


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old... but i like it...

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