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Watching me
written by lost_cause11:40 PM 9/13/04She looked so distaught
Crying in the dark
She was ripped into pieces
She had a broken heart
I watched from the window
As she got up and moved
She went into the bathroom
Moping in gloom
She ran a cold bath
She got in still clothed
You could see all her pain
The feeling she loathed
She slit her wrist wide open
And I understood why
I felt lost and confused
When I committed suicide |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by drowninginmyblood (9-14-2004 - 12:31 PM)
| I thought it was really well written, you didn't write everything on how you felt, but how others might see you. |
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