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» Poem: first timer
first timer
written by bleedblack
01:36 AM 9/14/04
she scratches away
not knowing her bounds
its her first time
she doesnt know her grounds
she just wants
to fit in
she wants to relate
she wants to win
she cant find
her place
to everyone
she is such a disgrace
so she cuts
and slashes
makes deep
gashes
because no one
understands
she can't meet
their demands
she can only
be so much
she needs your love
she needs your touch
not your words
so cruel and mean
shes not abnormal
shes just another teen
she may need
some extra support
to get through the bad times
but this time her luck has run short
she carves herself
into her nightmare
nothing can save her
from this despair


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by Death Fairy (9-14-2004 - 01:42 AM)
Its a good poem.

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