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break away
written by bleedblack02:19 AM 9/14/04you were always
a part of me
but you've broken away
now i can see
i understand
what your trying to say
that you want to leave
and you cannot stay
if i really cause you
that much pain
then i want you to go
to be happy again
i dont want you to
hurt anymore
i don't want to be
your chore
i want you to be happy
so i'll be unselfish and give you up
i'll set you free
with this poisonous cup |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
if you dont get it ... it says that if you want to break away from me i will kill you and set you free ... thats basically the summary of the poem ... kinda twisted ... please leave comments on whether you liked it or not
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Suicidal_tears (9-14-2004 - 02:38 AM)
| lol thats grea if u break away ill kill u lol im kinda freaky would u say? but good |
by Luminata (9-14-2004 - 03:26 AM)
| awsome..i want to kill someone..that would be fun..im bored..blood is yummy..consult a phyasition |
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