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» Poem: In a distance
In a distance
written by darknesswithin
04:02 PM 9/14/04
A flower twirls in a sitance.
As it gracefully falls.
to wonder about the world before it falls.
A maiden cries for help.
I yearn to know what for.
The rain falls on the hot summer grass.
I miss my beautiful longing day.
i wanted to give up my trust,
but as another petal falls so do you!
i feel so weak,mistreated,and lonely.
i don't know what to do.
i just lay in bed thinking about you.
About that fool.
how could i've been so blind.
to not have taken up his time.
why did he leave me?
why did he hurt me?
why did i do it?
just for me?
this is all i want to know!
a tear falls down my cheek,
as i sing the lovely song.
beaten, blood strems in my tears.
i was hurt for so long.
I couldn't tell.
the shadows would come get me and i would fear.
In a distance what could be near?


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
it's about me not giving up on this one guy but i finally let him go.

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by darknesswithin (9-14-2004 - 04:02 PM)
i love my POEM!

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