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responsibility
written by emo to the skibbies08:47 PM 9/17/04not my responsibility
not my clause
i didnt sign up for this
no where in the fine print
did it say responsibility
i never wanted to be anything
before my time
yet i'm more than i can ever grow up to be
whats the point in living?
with all these suicidal fantasies
i'm more tan anyone could be
and now i'm done
with all the responsiblity
i'm all i'll ever be
i never wanted tio be anything
before my time
yet i'm more than i can ever grow to be
whats the point in living?'
with all these suicidal fantasies |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (11-2-2004 - 05:35 AM)
by ashevil (11-2-2004 - 09:19 AM)
by (anonymous) (11-2-2004 - 04:41 PM)
| WHOA that sucks, so does most poetry, especially amateur stuff that you see regularly on goth/emo livejournals. |
by (anonymous) (11-2-2004 - 09:50 PM)
| You have all the poetic talent of President George Bush. Nobody gives a shit.
Hang yourself; that'd be some "creative expression" I'm sure we'd appreciate much more than your constant production of shit-poor poetry.
Thanks. |
by Morbid Angel (11-2-2004 - 10:16 PM)
| hmm...I know I'm not great but...I've seen better dear.xx |
by Bloody_Wrist_Angel (11-2-2004 - 11:45 PM)
| i like it... i will not diss on your poetry.. i think most all poetry is good in it's own way |
by (anonymous) (11-3-2004 - 12:04 AM)
| Go snort a line of battery acid you emo fucktard. Down the street and across the jugular is where you razor needs to travel. |
by ashevil (11-3-2004 - 02:19 AM)
| wtf is wrong with all u sorry fucks this poems kicks ass FUCK YOU ALL THAT DON'T LIKE IT |
by (anonymous) (11-3-2004 - 03:24 AM)
| one day you'll realize that nobody cares
at least if you think about killing yourself, you'd be motivated to do something with your life |
by (anonymous) (11-3-2004 - 03:48 AM)
| what a bucket of shit. did this come out of just your asshole alone or did you need help? |
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