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» Poem: falling to pieces
falling to pieces
written by vampire_princess
08:18 PM 9/18/04
My heart is falling to pieces,
My love for him ceases,
When I remember what happen before,
With that evil whore.

She took away my love,
She slapped me with her leather glove,
And she managed to come out above,
Her hand intertwined with my true love’s.


Many there after,
Only tore my heart more,
After that filthy whore,
I hate her to the core.

Now I found someone,
Who promises to never leave,
He begs me to marry him,
on hands and knees.

So what do I tell him?,
When I say no,
What do I do?,
When I’m left all alone.


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» Comments / Feedback
by (anonymous) (9-18-2004 - 08:36 PM)
This poem is so real for me. I was in love and then some girl took him away, now someone else wants to marry me and I don't know what to tell him.

by DevilKisses4u (9-19-2004 - 01:05 AM)
yeah i can totally relate to your poem..yeah i fell in love with someone and then someone took him away but then someone else came in the picture but i would let him get to close and now i am alone.......: (

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