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Crazy little suicide
written by Trapezium02:10 PM 9/19/04I want to shut my eyes on the world,
And stop my breathing,
I try to strangle myself,
But I panic,
I know I want to die,
It's just the do it yourself part that gets me,
They say If you want something done,
Get the best or do it yourself,
I've never been good at DIY though,
The rope would fray,
The whip would break,
The blade wouldn't be sharp enough,
Too little pills,
And I couldn't find a gun,
All of these crazy suicides are running through my head,
The problem is not one of these gaurentees my death,
I've tried most of them,
And the thers I just can't do,
And a tiny few of them,
I just know wont work,
I'll try it one more time,
This crazy little suucide,
I guess you'll know if it succeeded,
I told you it wouldn't,
I know it wont. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by i_love_sandy (9-19-2004 - 04:30 PM)
| its beautiful. i love your poetry. its so great...i wish i was you.....u dont want to die...beleive me....death is just reliving all this all over again....i know....cuz i tried...last week i had to go to the hospital....dont commit suicide please....all the madness will stop at the age of fourteen or fifteen....its not like your the only one going through this...alot of ppl are...and a bunch of ppl i love just commited suicide and i dont want u to be next...*tear* |
by Darkwolfgirl (9-19-2004 - 06:55 PM)
| i love ur poems. they are absolutely awesome! |
by cryptic_misery (9-24-2004 - 03:34 PM)
| well.. ok.. I am 15 and this shit hasn't stopped yet. It's only getting worse, for the most part. but anyway, Just be careful that's all i can say. Oh, beautiful poem. |
by (anonymous) (11-29-2004 - 06:49 PM)
| no the shit doesn't stop when you're "14 or 15" it keeps on going. hate to say it, but it's the truth. of course, in my case... the shit that keeps coming seems to be my fault, so for me...i guess i just have to learn how to make my life better myself... do it yourself shit again... you've hung on through some pretty tuff shit...and yes, it WILL get better... i promise, at some point...but i don't know when. you're a pretty strong person, kahno, whoever you are. and, honestly, i feel like i can really relate with a lot of your poems. i cut, and i od, and do all sorts of shit i know i shouldn't...trust me, it just makes it worse. i know it's cliche, but one day at a time... one minute, one second at a time if you have to.. not very hopeful, i know...but maybe it will help. it would really be a loss to this world if you died... and i don't care if you think that's bullshit, or not.. b/c it's the truth. maybe, if you feel like talking to a 17 year old american girl, email me.. furelise@backroads.net |
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