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» Poem: You
You
written by lost_cause
12:25 AM 9/20/04
I've lost the sparkle
The glow in my eyes
The part of me
That made you cry
He left me alone
Took it away
His selfishness
He couldn't slay
As I moved
From home to home
I wished for you
To sing that song
The one that you
Had always sung
It made me smile
Nothing was wrong
You've been there
Been taken away
I need you more
Day by day
Your the one
That I love most
Your my granny...
My biggest hope...


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
About my sick grandma... Not one of the best but it means a lot to me...

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by smile_inc (9-20-2004 - 01:23 AM)
AWESOME! ::high five:: That was really awesome. I need to read more of your poetry :)

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