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The Ideal Person
written by bleedblack12:05 AM 9/21/04I hate the way I look
I’m so big and fat
I wish my stomach
Was long and flat
I try to fix this
Nuisance of mine
I can’t work out
I don’t have the time
So when I eat
I try to get sick
But I hate doing this
I hate this trick
So bulimia doesn’t work
I’m still not happy with who I am
So I switch to anorexia
I don’t give a damn
I just want to be
As skinny as her
I want that beautiful body
My emotions I defer
I don’t care about
How I feel
All I care about now
Is to be the ideal
I want to be
Every person’s idol
I don’t want to be
Just another suicidal |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
This isnt really about me ... yeah i hate my body and i'm not comfortable with it and i think i'm fat but not to that extreme ... i added the "i don't want to be just another suicidal" part because it seems that that is all that i'm good for and all people think of me as ... so it sucks ... i dont want to be perfect ... i hate people who do ... its trying to achieve the impossible ... i hate it and so will you so who cares ... comments anyone???????
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| » Comments / Feedback | by SparkelyStars358 (9-21-2004 - 12:11 AM)
| your poems soo true...i really like it good job |
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