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» Poem: Fall
Fall
written by bleedblack
11:13 PM 9/21/04
i'm stuck
lost and alone
i don't know what to do
where should i go?
quit yelling at me
it doesn't help
it confuses me
you don't know how i felt
i'm sorry i
am the way i am
i can't help it
i do the best i can
i can't help
what i think
i don't control
my emotional links
i talk to you
but you don't listen
you usually change
the conversation
you talk over me
and make me feel small
sometimes i'm so down
i can't help but fall


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
feeling really down

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by Foiazzy (11-6-2004 - 09:07 PM)
It's really good. I like it.

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