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last beat of love
written by Dark Shady
02:43 AM 9/22/04
my heart beating so hard so fast you can feel it as if it was the subwoffer in ur car *BOOM BOOM...BOOM BOOM...BOOM BOOM* my breath so loud you can ear it even tho ur on the ground covering ur ears closen ur eyes as hard as u can blood drips from ur ears and eyes from what ive done i killed my self becuase i was there for u taken ur tears that come from your beauitful eyes i hold ur hand and hold u to my chest and show you that my heart beats for you and it beats the melody of love and the blood that runs thro my vains are full of love for u but now that im gone you all see i was there for u and no1 ever held me to their chest and let me know there was a heart beating the love for me so i took my life as if it was mine to take away my soul gone my heart stoped breathing stoped i took my life even tho it didnt belong to me it belonged to the girl i loved i took my life away from her even tho now she dosnt remeber me it was still hers but i hada do it it because her heart of love stoped beating for me and starting beating for some1 else and i couldnt stand it so i took my life becuase someone said theyd love me to the end....and this is .....my end....*drops his head and lets his last tear fall*


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
isnt it funny how ppl take "i love you" seriuosly? like someone actualy loved me....pffft yea right maybe if i payd for it....

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