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still crying
written by Xx brOken xX08:15 PM 9/23/04cried myself to sleep last night,
right after you called
we fought just like we always do
over nothing
over you just exaggerating things
and thinking your always right
we hung up on a bad note
i tried to go back to sleep
but i couldn't
i kept tossing and turning
thinking about you
thinking about us
and where im gonna end up
the phone rang
it starteled me
scared me out of my thoughts
i picked it up
it was you agian
but i wasn't sure
if i wanted to talk to you
i'm sick of the yelling and fighting
but you said you came to a conculsion
my throat got tight and i couldn't speak
i didnt want to hear what you were about to say
the next thing you said
was you wanted me;
never want to lose me
--what a relief--
we hung up on a much better note this time
but still for some reason, i started to cry
but why?
we were better now
but why am i still crying? |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (9-24-2004 - 01:38 AM)
| great poem!!! i really can relate to it but just the ending didnt turn out the same as urs ha after he said he loved me again i said fuck u n hung up n havent talked to him since :-P but hes a little stalker lol well anyway great poem :-P |
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