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darkness
written by bloodyfairy11:05 PM 9/23/04darkness fills the sky
strikes of lightning the ground
rain pours down
no one questions why
all i want to do is want to do is run
in the dark before the return of the sun |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Wolf_ofthe_Shadows (9-23-2004 - 11:32 PM)
| nice imagery althoug i have to ask why repeat the "all i want to do" line? |
by bloodyfairy (9-23-2004 - 11:55 PM)
| i didn't realize i repeated it |
by Darkwolfgirl (9-24-2004 - 04:04 AM)
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