| » Poem: trying to say goodbye |
trying to say goodbye
written by bloodyfairy03:00 AM 9/24/04i keep trying
but then i just keep writing
my emotions display themselves threw my writing
i need to realize i will never get someone new
if i can't get over you |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by blackwolf (9-24-2004 - 03:02 AM)
| Maybe you should write your poems longer, more discription would help.
"No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader." -robert frost. |
by hells_angel (9-25-2004 - 12:39 AM)
| i liked it alot! ya im having trouble getting over someone right now! keep wrting! and try and make yur poems longer, it might help get out yur emotions! |
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