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without direction
written by zen01:31 AM 5/28/04not lost
oh no
definately not lost.
No fathom or glimmer the last time I truely felt lost
aimless
oh yes
purely no direction
No yearning to find forth a motion to direction
a boat on the water
the oars lay inside
the sails on the mast
but my hand feels not the grip of the rudder
on occasion
the waves and swells rock my soul
I listen to the ocean breeze
and peer up at the clouds and stars
yet none of it has any cosmic significance
All boats on the water are meaningless to the ocean
why does it matter where you steer? |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
not lyrical
no rhymes
There is a sortof rhythm though
It's more about a feeling
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| » Comments / Feedback | by s l i c e - o f - l i f e (5-28-2004 - 09:11 PM)
| oops sorry wrong button, n e ways i really |
by SilverlineKai (9-23-2004 - 10:46 AM)
by Emma! (9-27-2004 - 04:44 PM)
| liking it zen, liking it very much. |
by blackie-hawk (3-3-2005 - 07:41 PM)
by rose~in~the~rain (4-16-2005 - 04:54 AM)
| Wow I like it a lot. I understand... |
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