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I told ya so
written by liddle xxx punk06:42 PM 10/3/04I knew it would happen
It was a bad idea
Look at us now,
My eyes filled with tears
I wanted to tell you how i feel
But no matter how hard i try
I doesnt come out real
I feel bad for our actions,
we lived for the moment.
Look at us now.
Sorry but i told ya so. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Another sucky poem to add to my list..
I have thoughts running through my mind a million miles a minute...
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Xx brOken xX (10-3-2004 - 07:42 PM)
| i dont think it sucks. i like it. i really relate to it. . . good job |
by dancingrooster08 (10-6-2004 - 11:43 PM)
| AGGHHH. Quit saying your poems suck, you monkey! I swear, it is GOOD! IT IS GOOD, LOVELY, GREAT!
erika. |
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