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» Poem: hurt
hurt
written by Xx brOken xX
12:37 AM 10/6/04
day after day,
i'm hurting even more
i feel so broken
i feel bruised and battered
what did i do to deserve this?
all i did was love you...
but maybe that was wrong.
my heart feels
like its in a million pieces.
i feel like i'm dying inside
i'm so hurt
i cry myself to sleep
i used to where a smile
but now, i'm so hurt, that
i cant even fake one.
i can barely get any sleep
i just stay up,
thinking of what i could of done differently...
but its too late now
and now its the end
and i'm hurt...


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
just how i'm feeling... down and lonely

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by punkbitch05 (10-6-2004 - 01:41 AM)
i can really relate to this.. good job hun

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