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Je Veut Mort
written by Emo_Death_Wish01:45 AM 5/29/04You killed me on Tuesday
Well now it's Friday
And I still haven't been found
Cuz I'm 6ft underground
Where have you been looking
Cuz my souls lingering just above your head
Why hasn't anyone hooked me
Because I'm already dead
Chorus**Oh that boy that I talked about
Turned out to be my murderer
And he is without a shadow of a doubt
Also about to kill her
Well you spun my around on Monday
Well now it's Sunday
And I'm dizzy falling over myself
Caused me to confront what I felt
**Chorus**
La figure est blanche
Je veut mourir
Je ne me sent pas bien
Et Je suis tombe
**Chorus** |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by AuntyOptimistic (5-29-2004 - 10:25 AM)
| now, i don't mean this in a spiteful way...
but other languages are usually more effective in poetry/literature when the grammar is basically right.
i know this is your work, and i don't want to piss you off, but i love the french language, and these sentences don't read well.
(sorry again, i just had to say something)
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