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» Poem: i wish he knew
i wish he knew
written by Xx brOken xX
01:36 AM 10/10/04
i wish he knew
just how much i care
i wish he knew
just how much i like him
i wish he knew
how every time he smiles at me,
it makes my day ten times better
i wish he knew
how every time he looks into my eyes,
i lose my focus
i wish he knew
that whenever i'm around him,
i fight an urge to kiss him
i wish he knew
that all my problems go away,
when he holds me in his arms
i wish he knew
that i think i'm in love with him...


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yeah... this poem sucks

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» Comments / Feedback
by Darkwolfgirl (10-10-2004 - 02:22 AM)
it doesn't suck. its actually pretty good. i feel the same way about a guy. except i'm not really supposed to. he has a g/f.

by (anonymous) (11-12-2004 - 09:41 PM)
i like it....otha ppl might think its kinda corny but i do feel the same way bout sum guy juss....my best friend likes him 2....

by (anonymous) (12-9-2004 - 01:14 AM)
It was cool. I feel the same way for my b/f.

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