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on the edge
written by Xx brOken xX01:40 AM 10/10/04its cold out,
but thats okay,
i'll take a walk anyway.
i'll walk till i can't see you anymore
far away from here
i'll walk to the bridge
i'll look down at the rushing water
harsh and freezing
yet, the river looked so welcoming
it was the only thing that seemed to want me...
i felt as if it could comfort me,
drawing me in...
i step on the edge,
take a deep breath.
what should i do next?
jump or keep walking?
i'm already on the edge.
you've pushed me this far
you've made me stand here,
on this lonely edge.
....deep breath
1, 2, 3...
...Good-bye |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by hells_angel (10-19-2004 - 05:48 PM)
| wow...thats good! thats really good! makes me speechless just about!
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