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Revenge
written by pongster18212:56 AM 10/11/04The words slipping away from your lips,
rushing up to my ears...
I'm deaf now.
I drop down, lying on the ground...
blood escaping in my tears.
They're burning,
and your eyes, they're glowing with pride.
That smile cracked upon your face...shit,
you had this planned the whole time.
My head aches knowing the truth,
and now my leg is in pain as your foot approaches for another blow.
Is this the revenge you muttered in your sleep? |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
uhhhh this was bout an ex b/f. i hurt him emotionally and he hurt me physically AND emotionally. ya. teh end.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Fallen Beauty (10-11-2004 - 03:16 AM)
| bravo! I could read that over and over and over.... |
by (anonymous) (10-12-2004 - 01:10 AM)
| hi ps. lol, i agree with fallen beauty. ur poetry is good. cept rn't any of them a lil more happy? come on...guess who this is k? |
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