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Knocked Down
written by pongster18204:02 AM 10/11/04Just like everyone else,
I've been knocked down.
Knocked down and forgotten.
My own family left me in that dark hole.
I tried climbing to the top,
but I kept sliding down deeper...
letting my blood smear across the walls of endless misery.
Forever longing for a sign of life, a bringer of light...
I still sit at the bottom of Earth's wound. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i hav no idea where that came from...but ya. evrytime im actually happy, either a family member or really close friend that i consider family puts me down again..
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| » Comments / Feedback | by no_oppurtunity_wasted (10-11-2004 - 04:47 AM)
| thats so sad but keep smiling i would |
by (anonymous) (10-12-2004 - 01:01 AM)
| hey ps. nice poem. hope i wasn't one of those ppl that put u down. i dnt think so though, u said i always made u smile! |
by (anonymous) (10-12-2004 - 03:20 AM)
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