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» Poem: Death of Me
Death of Me
written by pongster182
02:55 AM 10/13/04
My arms around your neck,
you're humming a song in my ears.
It's that lullaby you told me about
that's supposed to make me deaf...

Your hot breath against my neck,
the acid biting through to my lungs.
I look up into your eyes,
why your sudden decision?

Your eyes,
the deep blue.
I feel water around me,
filling my lungs...
Shit, I'm drowning.

A sweet guy,
now a murderer.
My ex,
now in his home with the scent of death.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is bout eric! dipshit...and as i read this poem looking for mistakes, i c it makes no sense at all to a stranger. i think. ok...well to fill the curious ppl in, i felt like eric wanted to destroy me that nite. and ya. there's meh story.

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» Comments / Feedback
by (anonymous) (10-14-2004 - 02:01 AM)
i nver meant to do that to u.

by hobo (10-16-2004 - 05:06 PM)
fuck u eric! get a sn on zenhex so it isn't always anonymous.

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