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my release
written by SilentScreamsofDeath10:15 PM 10/13/04Crying, sobbing, weeping
in the steamy bathroom
with my face on the cold counter top
and the water running
My lungs aching for cool air again
My body denying.
One hand clenching a towel as if
it could save my life
As my mind trips back to the past
and torments my emotions
until I can no longer stand to think.
The tiles on the wall are
slick with moisture
(is it my tears?)
and I am falling
falling
falling down
and my hand falls open
and I release
my release. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
suicide is as likely and as inevitable as date rape OMG what a horrible comparision i should be shot for that
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| » Comments / Feedback | by dazed&confusedfreak~ (10-13-2004 - 10:28 PM)
| i thought it was beautiful!! |
by Darkwolfgirl (10-30-2004 - 11:30 PM)
| awesome. i love ur poems. |
by lifescolddeath (12-31-2004 - 02:14 AM)
| ŝĆ•ŧ I love your poems im ganna call you soon(most likly) well ttyl bye~! |
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