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» Poem: What's happening?
What's happening?
written by izzzy
02:00 AM 10/15/04
I knew a thing that wouldn't sleep,
it couldn't laugh, it couldn't weep,
it couldn't smile, it couldn't cry,
for all I knew it wouldn't die.

I knew a thing that wouldn't choke,
it was no chick, it was no bloke,
it wasn't thin, it wasn't tall,
in my view it ain't here at all.

But I knew a thing that wouldn't live,
it couldn't take, it couldn't give,
it couldn't touch, it couldn't hold,
it wasn't shy, it wasn't bold.

I knew a thing that wouldn't speak,
it wasn't strong, it wasn't weak,
it wasn't here, it wasn't there,
but in my head it's everywhere.

I knew a thing that's deep inside,
it wouldn't show, it wouldn't hide,
it couldn't taste, it couldn't smell,
it kept me locked up in a cell.

I know a thing that wouldn't sleep,
it couldn't laugh, it couldn't weep,
it couldn't smile, it couldn't cry,
but o please God just let me die!


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
When I said "I know a thing" in the last stanza, I was referring to myself. All the other things were about the things in my head.

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» Comments / Feedback
by Gr8Day2BnEmoKid (10-18-2004 - 05:03 AM)
amazing...lyrically: amazing....honesty: amazing...very good man

by Gr8Day2BnEmoKid (10-18-2004 - 05:03 AM)
amazing...lyrically: amazing....honesty: amazing...very good man

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