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Broken Glass
written by Morning Star07:57 PM 10/15/04I scream at the mirror
Hating the monster I see there
It yells back in a silent cry
I beg it to leave me alone
It wont leave, just keeps staring
Everywhere I move to
I turn, it's still there
It speaks only with silence
I can't take this anymore
I yell one final warning
It mocks me in silence
With a heavy bloe the glass shatters
I laugh in triumph but soon scream
I fall to the floor and huddle in the corner
I am surrounded by monsters now
Images staring silently from the broken glass.. |
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» Comments / Feedback | by blood drinker (10-15-2004 - 10:37 PM)
lol wow...i really like this one... |
by chocoholic22 (10-15-2004 - 10:53 PM)
i like it. good image at the end |
by izzzy (12-3-2004 - 08:22 AM)
I have to agree with choc. I like how you did the imagry at the end, it was very clever. |
by Darkness_is_Falling (4-3-2005 - 06:42 AM)
I think this is my favorite poem of yours that i have seen. The imagery is so clear. I really enjoyed reeading it. |
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