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tonight
written by Trapezium05:43 PM 10/16/04What would you do if I died tonight,
Without giving you one last goodbye,
Would you lay down and cry,
Would you do the same and die.
Cry yourself to sleep my sweetheart don't feel sore,
When you open your eyes I wont be here anymore,
I'll fly away and you can be sure,
I'll stay with you, I'll love you forever more.
Baby just forget about me,
Finally I'll be free,
I'll let go of my destiny,
I should have done this ages ago sweetie.
Don't feel like it's your fault 'cause it's not,
My life's been getting too hot,
Someone should have killed me I should've been shot,
Baby I love you a lot.
Just baby let me go,
If you let me have this oppurtunity I hope you know,
I'll be a shining star for you I'll glow,
My ugly face will glisten in the snow.
Every little thing will remind you of what we had,
You wont care about how I felt so bad,
When I'm gone you'll forget and be glad,
That I'm just another little fad. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by nightrain030 (10-16-2004 - 05:52 PM)
| That was a very interesting poem. Very Very good. |
by hells_angel (10-18-2004 - 09:30 PM)
| hey sweetie...omg sandy dont do what i think yur gonna do! baby you better not, i dont care whats going on in yur life...YOU BETTER NOT!!!! i DO care about you and i DO love you! and i will care about what would happen to you and how you feel and whats going on with you! i want to kno and i want to be there for you and help you out with what ever yur going through! REMEMBER...YOU DO HAVE SOMEONE WHO CARES ABOUT YOU AND WHO WANTS YOU TO BE ALIVE AND WELL ON THIS HORRID PLANET! NO MATTER HOW MUCH YOU WANNA DIE, I WILL BE THERE TO HELP YOU THROUGH IT! my promise to you is that i will always be there to talk to, to listen, and to be as good of a friend as i possibly can be! i love you sandy...i really do! and yes i will truly be torn apart inside and out if you do anything! BUT YOU BETTER NOT!!! im here if you need to talk whether you like it or not!__love always yur friend angela |
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