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» Poem: When it rains
When it rains
written by Trapezium
07:04 AM 4/11/04
When it rains I think about you,
When it rains I always miss you,
Whenever I see you I'm filled with love,
Whenever I see you You are like a dove,
I know i must be happy because i know,
Just for me you'll put on a show,
I'll do anything you want me to,
Just because you're you,
If you ever leave me,
I will be as upset as can be,
I wont have a life anymore,
And inside i will always feel sore,
You have everything a girl can need,
You are beautiful pretty and sexy,
Your personality can't be betta,
I remember the time i met ya,
I want you more than i can bare,
With you my love i want to share,
So my gorgeous Josie,
Will you go out with me,
And be with me forever,
So we can live together.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
This is just a rough of the poem i'm gonna give to Josie, please tell me how to make it better or if it's great as it is. Thanks in advance

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by MorbidPunk9065 (4-12-2004 - 12:08 AM)
Aww! Thats so sweet!

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