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suicide lullaby
written by lost_cause
09:24 PM 10/19/04
Sing to me of the blood that pours
And the pain of bleeding hearts
Show me the world of falling tears
And "We'll never be apart"s
Sing to me of the open wounds
The cuts deeper than the skin
Ask me how I feel inside
I wouldn't know where to begin
Hand me the knife and let me go
I know what needs to be done
I'll even smile once more for you
But I still have to run
Here's a hug, my last goodbye
I hope you'll be okay
I love you so much you don't know
I'll smile while I drift away
Remember how you used to sing
Sing to me while I die
The music fades, a final kiss
To end my suicide lullaby


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comments? I like this one a little...

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by sonumbed (10-19-2004 - 09:28 PM)
it was pretty

by NirvanaGirl23 (10-19-2004 - 09:58 PM)
I like it a lot.

by bloodyfairy (10-19-2004 - 11:42 PM)
that was pretty good

by TheTearsNo1CanSee (12-27-2004 - 07:43 PM)
That was awesome! I loved it!

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