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» Poem: duality within
duality within
written by lost_cause
12:40 AM 10/20/04
This life is so unnerving
I hate it all
When are you going to kill yourself?
I can't wait until your next fall!
I can't wait to see you suffer!
I want to see you cry!

Why do you want all this pain?
Why should I not try?

I hate you!
I hate everything you do!
I know you want to live
But I'm telling you we're through!
I hope you die!
I want you to burn in hell!
Kill yourself already!
You know you want to, I can tell!

Shut Up! I don't want to die!

Whatever Bitch! Don't fucking lie!

Go away!
Leave me alone!

But why should I?
This is my home!
You have no more power here
I've taken it all away
You have no where else to go
Where else could you stay?
Oh, stop acting like a baby
Don't sit there and cry
You get so annoying
That's exactly why you need to die

I am getting better
I won't breakdown now

Look at yourself!
That's more than I can endow!
Your crying, sobbing,
Broken down!
Don't lie to yourself
You've hit the ground!
Your over!
I'm in charge here now!

I won't give up!

You will too! It's my vow!


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
It's a little confusing... It's about the battle inside of me... Notice how the part that want's to die is much bigger...

Basically... 85% of me wants to die... The other 15% doesn't... And they are arguing...

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