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stray from love
written by devil-dick07:44 PM 10/20/04id offer you a lift,
but you'd turn me down.
id offer you love,
but you just frown.
id offer you me
but you turn me away.
id offer you happiness
but you'd just sway.
id offer you what you want
but you say no.
id give you what you need
but yet you always go |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by NirvanaGirl23 (10-20-2004 - 08:02 PM)
| i like it. i read the one HIM and it is really good too. i just thought i would comment on this, thinking you would see it first or something..? Lateerrr, |
by NirvanaGirl23 (10-20-2004 - 08:05 PM)
| oh yah, and maybe a title like.. "stray from love" or "you dont want my love"..i dunno, those are kind of horrible ideas. haha, LauRen oh yah, U2U me sometime |
by (anonymous) (10-28-2004 - 08:45 PM)
| yeah...groovy baby!
lol
xxXxx |
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