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Journey to death (Step)
written by Schizophrenic_broken07:07 PM 10/21/04Three steps forward,
Step, Step, Step.
Open the door,
Creak, Creak, Creak.
Another three steps,
Step, Step, Step.
Reaching forward,
One, two, three.
Look at the clock
Tick, tick tick.
The knife is in your hand now,
Breath, Breath, Breath.
Touch your wrist,
Slit, slit, slit.
Watch it bleed,
Drip, drip, drip.
Feel the pain,
Scream, Scream, Scream.
Drop the knife,
Smash, smash, smash.
Step, Step, Step.
Creak, Creak, Creak.
Step, Step, Step.
One, two, three.
Tick, tick tick.
Breath, Breath, Breath.
Slit, slit, slit.
Drip, drip, drip.
Scream, Scream, Scream.
Smash, smash, smash. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by bloodlyvalentine (10-23-2004 - 04:43 PM)
| some of your poems start of as a dream, but they always turn into a nightmare. thats because life is a dream twisted by sin. but you have to make something good out of it. otherwise you'll end up twisted inside, against your own will and left alone to rot within your own sins. dont go down that road.
my life hasnt particualry been good. but i dont choose to cut myself, to cause myself more pain than i deserve.
my dad left us when i was a kid. i cant afford to even buy myself some nice clothes, i cant afford anything. last year, i got 'molestest' (sp?) but thats not the truth. nobody knows the truth and i cant tell anyone the truth. my heart is box full of secrets and people tell me that i can tell them but i cant, because first of all, i dont kow how to, and second of all, they'de run a mile before ide even finish one sentence. and it kills to keep so many secrets
dont make life worse than it is. no matter how deep your in the cave, theres always a speck of light in the distance. you just gotta run for that instead of going even deeper. |
by bloodlyvalentine (10-23-2004 - 04:48 PM)
| uh, i forgot i wasnt anamous anymore, shite. well, now you know something about me. *bashes her head against the wall* im such an idiot |
by Schizophrenic_broken (10-23-2004 - 06:53 PM)
| yes, i no who u are, and I'M SORRY, 4 the shit I said about you |
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