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» Poem: can't let you down
can't let you down
written by bleedblack
12:48 AM 10/22/04
cutting deeper every time
acting as if things were fine
crimson blood covers my wrists
asking why my life exists
covering the truth with a smile
making my time seem worthwhile
not letting myself let you down
i just can't, i won't let you drown
you don't deserve this pain, i do
if anything, i'll save you
but these thoughts of mine are so messed up
so i'll have to be let go i can't handle these cuts


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» Comments / Feedback
by (anonymous) (10-22-2004 - 07:22 PM)
I understand... You should talk to someone... Is anyone around you can talk to? Hope you feel better

by bloodlyvalentine (11-7-2004 - 08:47 PM)
great, i dont know why i exist either and i hate it that i have to wak around with this stupid fake smile on my face most of the time and act like my life is fucking great

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