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Ocean and the Moon
written by IceBound
03:15 AM 10/22/04
let the whole thing pass me by,
i think about her face,
and how i fall into her eyes.
there is no time to waste asking why,
i don't need to solve this case,
and i don't need to look behind.
the outline that i trace,
around the one that i call mine.
with those 3 words said, repeating in my mind,
emotions start bursting,
great feeling, pure bliss.
stepped back to see the scene,
mind starts rehearsing.
focus, my mind tells me to be cautious,
as she leaves the room, i begin to breathe again.
I kiss the moon,
i can't deny, something is coming over me.
lost to find, and a soul to keep,
a trial by fire, a love i've won.
Inside i wait...
this world is crazy,
my dream is fading,
you draw such pictures in my head.
until the time comes, to carry the one,
make that dream real, be sure it stays done.
a vision that's caught, never left behind,
i miss and thin of you often,
patience and days will refashion, what hours will undo.
circles not yet circles, somehow close true,
keep hearing things you've said, feel you straight to my head.
what it must be, we'll take as a sign.
I drift away, and you pull me in,
i'm the ocean, you the moon.
how do i know if it's just me?
sometimes i think if must be,
you got to know you can trust me.
I think of you more than i should,
now there's a structure where nothing had once stood.
no reason to look back now, i'm already here,
cuz you give me faith, if anything happens unexpectedly,
i know you're here.
with all this said i hope you know,
that you can trust me, and it's 2a.m., i've gotz to go.
I hope you know, that i love you so...


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» Comments / Feedback
by DonnieDarko (10-22-2004 - 05:38 AM)
Nice poem even though you stold the begining from the song "Echo" by Trapt. Don't steal other peoples work. Thats just really low......do your own stuff or dont do nothing at all.

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