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Not The Girl You Thought I Was
written by Schizophrenic_broken10:34 AM 10/23/04One by One, I'm letting go,
Not just because I'm feeling low.
You messed me up, pretty bad,
For days I cried, I felt so sad.
One week you called me every day,
I couldn't talk, I have nothing to say.
Tonight I felt much stronger,
I'd thought about it longer.
So today when you called me,
I told you what you need to see.
Yet you took it really badly,
Which made me hang up sadly.
Later, you said you'd call again,
And you did despite the pain.
The truth, you didn't know,
Your pain, I heard it show.
I let you catch me as I fall,
Still bouncing off the wall,
The echo's of my scream,
I wish this was all a dream.
It wasn't your fault really,
I almost told you. nearly,
I just needed to know someone cared,
A problem told, is a problem shared.
But I never let it pass my lips,
We sat in silence, vodka sips,
It started off with just one kiss,
Those happy days is what I miss.
We let it go to far,
Everynight at the bar,
Then that night we went to bed,
That's what really messed my head.
I was scared of what they'd think,
At the edge, on the brink,
Yet my true friends stuck by me,
My best friend showed me, made me see.
That I shouldn't waste it all on you,
I know, through whatever, this is true,
Yet still you called me up at night,
To tell me what you thought was right.
I never lied, you just assumed,
On our fate, it had loomed,
I don't know why, I love you still,
Like a drug, just like a pill.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (10-23-2004 - 04:47 PM)
| yet my best friends stuck by me. yeah we got u through that unless u mean stevie whom didnt even know. we got u through the mess u got ureself into we got u through all the messes u got ureself into unless it was a lie just like everything else u sed. we trusted u
but now |
by bloodlyvalentine (10-23-2004 - 05:26 PM)
| he might be smart buy ur just a bimbo
hahahahahahahahahahahaha |
by Schizophrenic_broken (10-23-2004 - 06:48 PM)
| It ain't a lie. And the friends I speak of are BAILEY, NADIA and KIRAN.
Yet again, I'm sorry |
by tainted_rose (10-24-2004 - 12:11 AM)
| hey. i liked your poem and if it's not rude, i would like to know what you went through. if you don't want to say. thats fine. well, i liked your poem, either way. |
by bloodlyvalentine (10-28-2004 - 12:12 PM)
| i like your name Tainted_rose |
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