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» Poem: So Cold
So Cold
written by A7XRandolph
08:26 PM 10/24/04
Embracing death, I can't take anymore,
This life is gone, this world is a bore,
Nothing to live for, my soul has succumbed,
A tormented soul is what I have become,
Dying of hatred and living a lie,
So numb, so cold, that is my vie,
My soul losing its eyes, losing its ears,
Entirely black, condemed with fear,
Once again, I find myself fleeing,
Always thinking, always fearing,
The love that I had, now cold and hard,
My free soul now caught and barred,
Pleasurable sleep as I drift out of existence,
Crying in my own tears, my fear tense,
Accepting that which is inevitible,
My heart feeling fickle,
This is what I give to you,
My hope, my soul, my love being slued,
No longer can I live, without you, my love.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
For you, Julia.

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» Comments / Feedback
by mad tears (10-24-2004 - 08:28 PM)
its very nice love...i will never leave you

by morbidangel21 (10-25-2004 - 01:55 AM)
I love it. That was awesome.

by NiteStalker (10-27-2004 - 04:00 AM)
DUDE!!! Very nice... If a girl were to read that, she'd be dying to want you...

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