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personal Hell
written by devil-dick12:04 AM 10/25/04Hell, the burning pits, the scorching flame.
if your there, your to blame.
but in reality, thats not true.
Hell isnt where you go, it is you.
the feeling of hollowness, the insecure.
the illness, the cold with out a cure.
you dont plan to go through it, but you do anyway.
getting there wasnt the problem, just the ability to sway.
your alone, your empty, your hollowness dont end.
things get worse, so each day in Hell you spend.
you try to find the path out, you look for saving grace.
you believe you find her, only to get kicked in the face.
you wish to die, but what would that prove to you.
the easy way out yeah, but your able to fight through.
you know it ends eventualy, but you just cant get a grip.
win or lose, you get to choose if you stay in this pit.
yeah its hard, impossable some would even say.
time is cruel, but with help you will find away.
we all have someone close, someone by our side.
they dont mind our moves moving in and out like the tide.
they love us, and there willing to help the best they can.
they love us like their our number 1 fan.
so yeah, lifes a bitch, and we find it hard to fight.
but stick in there, you'll get through the night.
we choose our paths, we get to choose now too.
to get help dont rely on others, rely on you.
you fight, you win, you make it to thenew day.
your strong enough to push it away.
so stay calm, dont get angry, take it easy.
you now its hard, and so do i, life isnt sleasy.
nothing is impossable, nothing to hard to reach.
its upto us to get out of Hell, this is our lesson to teach. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
time may be a bitch, but its all we got guys. stick it through, and we'll be thankful soon. hope this helps everyone
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (10-25-2004 - 12:06 AM)
| It kinda bounces from subjects, but its well written. nice. |
by Dark Intentions (10-25-2004 - 12:13 AM)
| It definitley lets you see another view...but it is a good lesson to be learned sooner then later... |
by (anonymous) (10-25-2004 - 12:16 AM)
| love this poem!...made me think allot..hmmm *thinks* great work =) |
by Departed+from+the+sane (10-25-2004 - 10:47 AM)
| i really like this aiden :) one of your best id have to say :) keep it up chuck :) ¥Claire¥ |
by (anonymous) (10-25-2004 - 05:23 PM)
| good poem, got a little confused, but tis kool ;) ellie.. xx |
by (anonymous) (10-28-2004 - 08:10 PM)
| *reads it and think* great work =)
but i agree with anon...it kinda bounces from subject to subject
but apart from that...yay!
xxXxx |
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