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» Poem: She
She
written by lost_cause
08:35 PM 10/25/04
She's so perfect
Not a flaw you can see
Something so beautiful
So unlike me
She has everything
Such a perfect soul
Yet she is so sad
Smiling got old
Why she's unhappy
I have yet to see
Nothing has happened
What can it be?
How can perfect
Have something wrong
Why made her sing
Such a sad song
There's no rhyme or reason
Not a clue as to why
She chose to live
On the edge of suicide


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by bleedblack (10-26-2004 - 01:00 AM)
good job ... is it about anybody specific?

by lost_cause (10-26-2004 - 07:17 PM)
Yeah... You...

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