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Falling
written by Trapezium11:36 AM 10/26/04Am I destined to be shamed,
To be tormented to my life's ending,
To live life in the corner,
To continue cndescending.
Was I born just to be sad,
Was I born just for the darkness,
To blindfold my emotions,
To take my life and depress.
I live under a sky of blackened fog,
Of cascading thoughts and lies,
Into this hole I'm falling,
I live my life wondering why.
Engulfed in a bursting pyro,
Falling ever longer,
If I survive this knife,
I'll be ever stronger. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
OK, this is one of the shittest poems I've ever written. I have writers block
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Morbid Angel (10-26-2004 - 11:38 AM)
| It's good, it expresses what you're feeling, and thats what poetry is for right? x |
by i_love_sandy (10-26-2004 - 04:50 PM)
| it pwetty. i am back from the hospital:) and now i am 12:) i like this poem. none of ur poems are shitty! remember....hard now or harder later. later in life your life will be awesome...believe me i know . so does chris and cole and everyone else who was going through what u are now. i salute you fellow space cow(compliment) |
by Genocide Reaper (10-27-2004 - 07:46 AM)
| Hey man. Fuck writers block. Kick its ass out the door and dish out some Wicked Words like you always do. I know you can....Sincerly. The Poetry God. XXX |
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