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» Poem: my best friend
my best friend
written by bleedblack
12:07 AM 10/27/04
I see you happy
But you’re laughing in pain
Hoping to hide
Everything you’ve gained
You hate everything
And wish to die
I understand why
You feel you must lie
I know so much about you
And I only wish to help
But sometimes I’m so lost
I don’t know how you felt
I see the pain but sometimes
I don’t know why its there
If anything I could take
I would take your despair
I wish you to be happy
And separate hand from knife
If only one thing to give you
I would give you the will of life


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» Comments / Feedback
by Poetrywhoreslay (10-27-2004 - 03:16 AM)
Very kick ass poem...i dont know it just like spoke to me or some shit...it was kick ass dude...kick ass...

by bloodlyvalentine (11-7-2004 - 07:44 PM)
your a great poet

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