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The Day That I Die
written by johnnyrocks12:36 AM 10/27/04The world as I see it
Has gone dark and gray
The memories of me have faded away
The fuse of my death has been lit
No more hazel eyes shine
As I watch my life decline
My gold complexion dims
And the bad memories untrimmed
As the day goes by
I think of all my lies
My heart weakens with every beat
And now I can't even speak
I take one last breathe, so deep
Then close my eyes for an eternal sleep. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I wrote this poem two or three years ago. I really liked the outcome, hope you do to. Leave a comment!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Genocide Reaper (10-27-2004 - 04:33 PM)
| I like it a lot. AND I THINK OTHER PEOPLE SHOULD LEAVE SOME FUCKING COMMENTS!!! It deserves it man. =) |
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by fallen_&_lost_angel (3-9-2005 - 01:41 AM)
| IT'S NOT IN SONNET FORM HOWEVER IT WAS GOOD |
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