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Youngen
written by Dark Shady02:01 AM 10/27/04| When i Was with the girl i loved i was star struck i fell in love before and had my heart broken but i let u hold my heart up hi and she made me feel like i was a different person i used to want to die tryn to kill my self 2times a day if it was a good day but when we were together if it was a really bad day i would only cut my self a little bit but not to much cuz i wanted to see my girl one more day be4 leavening this fucked up world i would scream her name when she wasn’t there i would carve her name into my skin and let the blood poor out and now the scars are gone and she’s gone but the love will still be burning in my cold heart icy flames of love maken my body do things here i am by her side in sprit she left me and i told my self i gota keep goin so i can see her again even though there are 1000s of miles between us 7hrs between us but in my mind she’s not a heart beat away i hold her in my arms one last time give her one last kiss only if she could feel it the flames kept burning and it burned me alive and her love took my life now I’m just a lonely sprit tryn to say GOOD BYE |
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*sighs* hi yes i know my poems suck:(
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| » Comments / Feedback | by nightrain030 (10-27-2004 - 02:39 AM)
| Everyone is a great poet. If you can put emotion on a piece of paer or express it in any way you are a good poet. At least that is what I think. Awesome poem by the way. Very good poem. I realy liked it. |
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