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You.
written by GeNoCiDaL_nInJa03:37 AM 10/27/04You make me bleed.
You make me feel.
You're the pain inside.
You're the thin piece of steel.
You're the icy cold metal
Of the barrel of a gun
When all of this shit
Erupts from just fun.
You're the reason I love.
You're the reason I cry.
You're the reason I live.
You'll be the reason I'll die. ~To be continued.~ |
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This poem has no background... Well..It kinda does...I know that the background's there..I just don't know what it is yet...
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| » Comments / Feedback | by oXGraySummerDayXo (10-27-2004 - 03:41 AM)
by Dark_horse (10-27-2004 - 06:16 PM)
| i like it...its more or less how i feel bout this guy...he means everything to me...but he dnt feel the same..:S o well nice write :D xx |
by CowgirlRyRy12 (2-25-2005 - 12:59 AM)
| i like it alot i want to no the rest.. |
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