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written by suicidal_cherry_lunatic07:15 PM 10/27/04Eating me up inside,
My soul, torn and battered,
My heart, ripped and tattered,
My mind flashes with weakness,
The cells in my body, dying with this bleakness,
My bones, crumbling with the weight of this burden,
I can't live anymore, that's for certain,
Only my ears, can hear my silent screams,
That chase away my dreams,
Only my heart can feel this pain,
That i hope i will never feel again,
But i know for sure that i will never have to,
because world, im leaving you,
Im trapped in the darkness,
The light is out of my reach,
No-one hears my cries for help,
However much i yell and yelp,
I can't think of another way to get out of here,
So as i take my last breath,
I just wanted to say
Seeya. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
jus thad to write summat down and this is what it ended like, i couldnt think of a title so email me ur ideas! thnx
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| » Comments / Feedback | by suicidal_cherry_lunatic (10-29-2004 - 12:16 PM)
| this poem took me 5 mins to write?!lool. dotn ask what its bout cos erm, u hav to work i tout urself! ha! lol cyaz hanah xxx |
by poo_smells (10-29-2004 - 12:20 PM)
| lololllll..das a stpid endin hanah to, a freaky poem like that i mean "seeya" hahaha das funnyyy...cya |
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